I love the style! And great story!
I love the style! And great story!
Thanks! I'm totally starting to dig working in this minimalistic style.
Not very funny, lip sync was ridiculously bad, drawings and backgrounds could use a lot of work.
Hahaha yeah, this animation was just to really test out how the mic wild sync up to the animations butI thought the concept was pretty funny and idk everyone I showed it to thought it was pretty funny... I guess you guys are just over saturated with great animators like ricepirate, oney speedosausage etc. this is literally my second ever animation. but I do appreciate the input! and I will definitely add more to the next with a different software that doesnt have extreme export issues. "note: the lip sync became bad on export. it was running perfectly until then. I had to delete multiple scenes, audio and simplify the background tremendously until it wood run semi properly, not that that's really your issue :P.I understood that this really isn't what it was supposed to be, I mainly posted to see if anyone knew how to fix that export issue
The first part of the animation was funny, but it quickly got worse.... I do not think the jokes at the end were worth the wait. It could have easily finished on the part where he was buying milk at a grocery story. Even then it wouldn't have been that funny, but at least the video would have been quick and charming. The animation is well done but I think that the jokes and the timing and execution could have been much better. I hope this helps you out :)
Yea dude, I totally get what you mean. I planned to end this animation with the grocery store scene in my original script because I thought that part was mildly amusing. However, after animating that I realized it wasn't long enough to be a submission in NATA, so I scrambled to complete the final part and in doing so lost a bit of comedic value. Thanks for the constructive critique!
Funny
Funny as hell but the animation is a little stiff. For example the white guy just moved his jaw when he laughed. But I bet you are better now so. :D
its true, i did rush alittle too hard on this.. anthony's laughing animation does make me cringe.
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Animation
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